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2017-01-05 10:52来源:镇江新航道精英教育作者:镇江新航道精英教育中心

  Making suggestions 建议信

  A library in your neighborhood plans to improve its equipment. As a frequent reader, please writing a letter to the administrator of this library and offer your proposals.

  You should write at least 150 words.

 

  雅思写作建议信范文:

Dear

  分析:

  典型的建议信可以分成四段。第一段说明自己的目的是提建议,第二段描述一下自己的想法,第三段提出自己建议里最核心的部分,第四段说明自己很希望得到回复。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

   I am delighted to learn that your library is taking steps to upgrade its equipment and I am writing this letter to offer my suggestions.

   As is known to all in this neighborhood, your library is not only essential for the local students, it also plays a crucial role in the work and leisure of the local professionals and retirees. Therefore, in my view, this library should be equipped with a wide range of equipment and facilities,including video and film collections, projectors, recording equipment and multi-media rooms to better facilitate the work, research and entertainment needs of the locals.

   Most importantly, more computers with access to the Internet should be available in this library. As a biologist, I am very interested in the information about the latest developments in the biological labs around the world. To my great disappointment, only one computer in your library has Internet access.This situation should be changed immediately. Otherwise, more local residents would end up feeling disappointed with this library.

   Since the information age has made this local library all the more important to our lives,I would be grateful indeed if you can take my proposals into serious consideration.

 

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