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2017年7月15日雅思写作考试真题回忆

2017-07-22 09:18来源:镇江新航道精英教育作者:镇江新航道精英教育中心

2017年07月15日 雅思写作范文解析

小作文

类型

Table

题目

The table below shows the percentage of people living in three types of dwellings in Australia in 2001 and 2006.
2017年7月15日雅思写作考试真题回忆图1

 

范文解析

这个题目属于动态图,且稍复杂,数据繁多。但注意,尤其是对于这种数据多的题,在时间有限的情况下,并不需要把每个数据都写到,要抓重点。本文要抓住两种重要的比较,一种是每个地区每种住房类型两年间的趋势变化,即每种住房类型的居民比例是上升了还是下降了还是保持平稳不变。另一种是每个地区每种房屋类型之间的比较,此题中,住House的偏多,其他种类偏少。在抓住重点的基础上做到概括性地比较,就可以做到既信息全面又不会在小作文上花太多时间导致大作文写不完。

专项词汇(范文中已用红色标注)

remained stable

保持稳定

experienced a slight increase

经历了一个小小的增长

decreased marginally

轻微地下跌

despite a minor drop/increase from…to…

尽管有小小的上升和下降(从…到…)

The same trend can be found in….

也具有相同的趋势

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

The table provides information about…

表格提供了关于…的信息

In terms of…

关于…

As for the situation in…

关于…的情况

By contrast,…

相比之下,…

范文

The table provides information about the proportion of people who lived in different types of dwellings in three places in Australia in two separate years.

 

In terms of the percentage of residents in Victoria, the figures for house and other remained stable in two years at 76%,(which was the highest figure across all the figures for Victoria) and 1% respectively. And the inhabitants who chose to live in semi-detached and flat experienced a slight increase from 12% and 11% to 13% and 12% respectively.

 

As for the situation in Northern Territory, most residents, the percentage of dwellers who lived in house decreased marginally from 67% in 2001 to 65% in 2006 although most residents still lived in this kind of dwelling. The same trend can be found in the figure for other (dipped from 12% to 11%). By contrast, only 9% and 8% people lived in semi-detached and flat in 2001 while slightly more people (10% and 9%) lived in these two types of dwelling in 2006.

 

Regarding to the situation in Tasmania, the majority residents lived in house, despite a minor drop from 88% to 86%. And the proportion of people living in other three types of dwelling was marginal and steady in both years.

范文原创自小站范砚秋老师

字数

206 words

 

大作文

类型

教育类

题目

 

 

Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文解析

本题属于教育类话题,讨论应该让家长给孩子读故事,还是孩子去自主读书,看电视等来获取信息。题目是discuss both views类型,因此必须双边讨论,即父母给孩子阅读的好处和孩子自主阅读的好处都必须讨论到,但注意这并不会影响到明确提出自己的观点,只要注意主体段之间的逻辑关系即可,下面通过文章结构来具体讲解。

文章结构

首段改写题目,并直接提出自己观点,觉得让孩子自主阅读更好。第一个主体段先讨论父母阅读的好处:可以让孩子更加容易的获取知识,因为父母可以在阅读的过程中为孩子解惑。段落中运用了解释说明和举例等论证方法。

第二个主体段转折,提出,阅读的意义绝不仅仅是为了获取信息,通过孩子自主阅读,可以培养孩子的学习自主性,并且孩子可以广泛地阅读。注意第二个主体段内的两个点是并列关系。

结尾段用让步状语从句总结观点,尽管父母读会更容易获取知识,但是自主阅读的意义更加深远。

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

be cynical about…

对…感到愤世嫉俗

rewarding

有益的

gain a better understanding of

更好地理解…

foster the love of

培养对…的喜爱

be never just confined to…

绝不仅仅局限于…

develop their autonomy in…

培养他们在…方面的自主性

self-paced

(学生)按照自己进度的

read extensively

广泛地阅读

reading independently

独立阅读

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

In my opinion…

我认为

On the one hand

一方面,…

That is to say…

也就是说…

For instance,…

比如说,…

What is more,…

另外,…

范文

In current society, people are cynical about whether parents should read stories to their children or let children gain information through books, TV and movies by themselves. In my opinion, it is a better method for children to obtain information through their own efforts.

 

On the one hand, the outcomes of reading by parents can be very rewarding, through which children can acquire knowledge more easily and smoothly. That is to say, in the process of reading, parents may provide children with detailed explanations. For instance, when children are confused about the differences of pandas and bears, parents can explain the differences from habits and characteristics, and through this, children can gain a better understanding of knowledge and maybe foster the love of reading.

 

However, the purpose of reading books or watching TV is never just confined to acquire knowledge or information. Apart from this, children can develop their autonomy in information obtaining and since this process is self-paced they can develop their time management skills and personality such as persistence, all of which is beneficial for their future study and career. What is more, a large number of parents are so busy that the time spent on reading for their children is limited and if children read books or watch TV, movies by themselves, they are more likely to read extensively and they will be more prepared when they encounter any problem in other fields in the future.

 

To sum up, while it is much simple for children to acquire knowledge if their parents read for them, I believe students can benefit more in the long term if they develop the skill of reading independently.

范文原创自小站范砚秋老师

字数

276 words




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