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托福独立写作范文:社会规则是否太严?

2017-01-14 15:38来源:镇江新航道精英教育编辑:镇江新航道精英教育中心

 小编今天给大家带来了2015年10月16日北美托福独立写作真题:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.社会规则是否太严?

 

  其实这是一道老题,2014年的时候托福独立写作就考到过老题。那么我们应该如何下手呢?

 

  破题思路:“社会规则”一词听上去非常高大上,无从下手。但是我们只要把它和我们的生活联系起来题目就会变得容场多了。“未成年人禁止进人网吧”,“禁止吸食毒品”,“中高考的设置”等等都是社会规则。这些规则看似很严格,却是十分合理和有必要的。如果没有这些规则的约束,年轻人在自控力不强的情况下很容易走错路。

  Introduction

  “社会规则”看似很严格,却对年轻人有指导作用。不仅可以帮助他们成为更好的自己,还可以使他们避免受到伤害。

  Body Paragraph 1

  社会为年轻人设定的规则虽然很严格,但是却是十分合理和有必要的,对年轻人有指导作用。

  本段中心:“社会规则”可以帮助年轻人更好地成长。

  举例说明::如果没有社会规则的制约,要求年轻人必须接受学校教育,那么他们就会变得为所欲为,沉迷于打游戏等活动而忽略了学习,这对年轻人的成长是有害的。

  结 论:社会规则可以指导和帮助年轻人更好地、更有效地利用时间,对他们的将来是非常有益的。

  Body Paragraph 2 当有了社会规则的制约以后,可以保护年轻人不受到伤害。

  本段中心:社会规则的制定可以帮助年轻人避免受到伤害。

  解释中心::如果没有很好的社会规则来约束他们的行为,年轻人很有可能做出一些愚蠢的决定。

  举例说明::比如,现在有许多年轻人涉毒,如果没有社会规则来制约这种行为,还会有更多的年轻人被毒品所害,甚至失去生命。

  结 伦:我们不应该把社会规则看成是一种束缚和制约,相反,它们会为年轻人的成长起到指导作用。

  Conclusion

  如果没有社会规则的存在,而年轻人又缺少很强的自控力,他们很容易走错路并受到伤害。因此,相比不停地抱怨社会规则的严格,我们更应该想谢它们为我们带来的好处。

 

  托福独立写作满分范文

  Social rules play an important role in every society, but whether or not the rules for young people are reasonable can be controversial. Some people believe that social rules for young people today are too strict, while others think they are reasonable. I believe that social rules for young people are not only reasonable, but good, because they help young people behave themselves and prevent them from hurting themselves.

 

  First and foremost, social rules exist as a way to instruct young people in proper conduct.For example, society expects young people to go to school every day and spend most of their day studying—this is to his or her own benefit. If this rule didn’t exist, young people might waste all their time playing video games or participating in other unimportant activities instead of spending their time learning how to read, write, and do mathematics.In this way, social rules help young people to use their time well and make good preparations for the future.

 

  Another reason that social rules are good for young people is that they protect them from hurting themselves.As has always been the case, young people today are likely to make foolish decisions if they do not have rules that set clear boundaries for their behaviors。For example, many students today get involved in drugs. Without rules against these substances, even more students would try these things. Drugs can do long-term damage to young people's futures because their minds and bodies can be severely damaged; some even die from overdosing。Good parents will always emphasize the insurmountable importance of schoolwork and remind their kids that sports and games are only a way to release stress from studies.Social rules should therefore not be seen as strict and restrictive, but as good guides for young people that are in place to help both the individual as well as society as a whole.

 

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