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托福独立写作题目+范文:游戏运动和家庭作业哪

2017-01-14 15:34来源:镇江新航道精英教育编辑:镇江新航道精英教育中心

 托福独立写作解析:

  破题思路:我们小的时候父母总是说“先把作业做完再出去玩”这样的话,这并不是没道理的。体育锻炼和做游戏虽然可以锻炼身体,沟通感情,但是从更加长远的角度来说,学习响着我们未来的发展,因此更加重要。所以,父母要首先关注孩子的学习,再陪他们一起玩耍。

  Introduction

  体育运动确实对孩子很重要,但是学习对于孩子更重要,这影响到他們的未来,所以家长应该花更多的时间在孩子的学业上。

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  考虑到孩子长远的发展,家长要把孩子的学业放在首位,体育运动和游戏只是在此基础上为孩子减压。

  本段中心:体育运动可以暂时减轻孩子的压力,但是对他们的长远发展影响很小。

  解释中心:除非孩子显示出了非凡的运动天赋和热爱,不然运动只应该被当作一种爱好。很少有孩子长大成为了职业运动员,所以明智的家长要鼓励孩子更加努力地学习文化知识,为未来的职业生涯做打算。

  举例说明:比如,家长可以鼓励自己的孩子玩游戏和做运动,但同时应该确保他们每天按时宗成功课,必要时帮他们解决作业里遇到的问题。

  结 论:我们不能忽视运动带来的积极意义,但它对孩子未来字业和职业的成就影响不大所以家长更应该重视孩子的学业发展。

  Body Paragraph 2 家长的态度影响着孩子的态度,因此家长首先要对孩子的学业重视起来。

  本段中心:家长只陪孩子玩但是不关心他们的字业会让孩子觉得学业不重要。

  解释中心:如果一个孩子看到父母只对做游戏感兴趣但不关心他们的学业,孩子就会觉得功课和学业不那么重要。我们生活中有太多这样的例子:父母耽于游戏,结果孩子学习不好,以后职业发展也不太顺利。

  举例说明:我的侄子学业成绩不那么理想,依我看,这很大程度上是因为他爸爸经常陪他踢球却从不帮解决课业问题。

  结 伦:好的家长会把字习放到第一位,让孩子知道运动和游戏只是课业之外的一种放松方式。

  Conclusion

  体育运动可以促进家长和孩子间的互动,但更重要的还是孩子的字业发展,这决定着他的未来。因此,与运动相比,学习是最重要的

  新航道托福培训教研团托福独立写作满分范文

  When thinking about the issue that parents should spend more time playing games or doing sports with their children, different people will have different ideas. While some people may believe sports and games are lots of fun and are great for the mental and physical development of children, I think that for parents kids’study will always take precedence. Parents should try to spend more time helping their children with their schoolwork, because schoolwork has more bearing on a child’s future.

 

  Sports and games are a great way to release stress, but they often have little effect on a child’s future.Unless a child shows remarkable natural ability and passion for a particular sport, sports and other games should be treated as a hobby only. Very few kids grow up to become professional athletes, so smart parents will emphasize academic excellence, and encourage their youngsters to study harder and prepare for their future careers.Parents should encourage kids to play games and get daily exercise to stay in good health, but, at the same time, should also make sure that they finish their homework on time every day and offer assistance as necessary.Although playing sports has many benefits for children that should not be overlooked,it will not ensure a young person’s future academic and career success, so parents must emphasize work over play.

 

  Furthermore, if parents constantly play games with their children but take no interest in their studies, then parents are setting a bad example for their kids.If a child sees his or her parents take great interest in playing games but none in going over homework, then that kid may end up feeling that homework and school are not important. Too many parents obsessed with sports and games have seen their children underperform— first in school, and later in a career.My nephew’s school performance doesn’t reach his full potential,and in my opinion,this can be largely attributed to the fact that his father makes sure to play football with his son regularly, but never sits down and helps with his homework.Good parents will always emphasize the insurmountable importance of schoolwork and remind their kids that sports and games are only a way to release stress from studies.

 

  Sports and games are great ways for parents to bond with their children,but they should always come second to the kids' schoolwork. After all, it is the schoolwork that will have a greater influence on the children’s future success.

 

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